Once upon a time there was a princess called Bella and she was in her castle in her bedroom and there was a big creepy spider trying to blow her castle down. Princess Bella was very sacred and then she started to run out of the castle. Next she found a new place to stay and have some sleep and then she went back to her castle and the creepy spider was still there and the spider was looking for the princess Bella but she was save by a knight and the knight send her back to her beauful castle the end.
I am a Year 8 student student at Pt. England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 3 and my teacher is Mrs. Tele'a.
I enjoyed your story Leah and thought your castle and princess were well done. You sort of needed the spider and the knight to complete the story.
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