Native Writing

In the Morning as I got outside with my Dad  I asked him if we could go in the tree house but he said “no” because when he was little he said he went in there and went up stairs and went in a room and there was a sign that said no one is allowed in this room because there was a trap in there and so we went back home while I went inside it was so so boring so I went to my room and played on my mums laptop while I was playing the game It was again boring so I went outside and played until it was getting with my brothers and when my brothers got inside the house I asked my dad to buy food for breakfast and when he went I went in the tree house and looked around. So I went  and did my homework and when my Dad came home I went out of my room and asked my dad if he buyed any hot chips  but he said “ no because he didn’t have enough money” so I grinned at him and  so I went outside and played next to the tree house and then I heard a sound in the tree house and so I looked behind me and there was no one looking at the window so I went inside the tree house and saw the kitchen with heaps of human food and a mouse trap and I tried to go past the stairs but I couldn’t because there was heaps of mouse traps so I didn’t want to take the stairs but I took the long way of go up stairs. Once I went back outside my mum saw me go outside of the tree house so my mum told me to came inside and have dinner a have a shower so I listened of what she said so after shower I fell asleep in the front so my dad waked me up because I had to sleep in my room.So in the morning I woke up and went to the window and the tree house disappeared but when I got outside it was there. So my mum called my name to eat breakfast and she said after breakfast me and my brothers had to get ready for school but my mum said to me that I don’t need to because I had to go to the doctors because I didn’t know that I had something stuck in my throat so I went to the doctors with my mum and went to the stairs and I saw my friend there because she had something wrong with her arm and things keep on coming on her arms. So when I got home I sneaked in the tree house and once I went in there the mouse traps was all gone so I wet upstairs and saw a room but it said no one is allowed I here because there is mouse traps everywhere so I went to another room and it said welcome in so I went in there and I stepped in the middle and a trap came on me and there was a person coming. So I tried to get out of the trap but I couldn’t so I just stayed there until the person came up to me and when the person came I saw her holding a knife to like the meat but it wasn’t  a knife it was a toy knife. Next I grabbed something to open the gate of the trap. When I opened it I ran downstairs and went outside because I was really scared and when I got out I saw the police outside the tree house and the police went in the tree house a put the person in jail because I heard my mum ringing the police because she was so worried about me than i had to go back home and stay with my family. But in the morning I went to the tree house once I went in there my aunty was there and i went to her and I asked her and she said “that she had buyed it because she had lived on the street for years and  years until her birthday she moved in the tree house. But as she moved in I was really terrified because my aunty was trapped in  mouse trap with mouse in there it was scratching  her very hardly.