In the immersion assembly we had questions to answer and we saw rhythmic gymnastics.On the stage we saw Australia and USA, even kiwis and we watched family feud. Next we saw basketball and there was some medals for Australia and kiwis and USA. We saw soccer and swimming and we saw sports. Even we saw Mr Burt.
Well done Leah. I like that you included information on many of the things they you saw. Next time, try and think about how many times you use the same words in your sentences. You have used "we saw" many times. How could you have changed this?
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