Once upon a time there was a fly called Ben and he was in his rusty house and he was sad because he didn't have any friends. Then a tiger and a butterfly found him on the path. They said do you want to be our friend? He said yes and then the other one was sad too and they were a cockroach and a spider. They said what happened to the other animals? Someone was being mean to us because we said can we play with you but he said no and then they went. He ran up to them and he punched them but they were not doing anything and then they started to run away. They found a place to sleep and in the morning they went somewhere like another rusty busty house but it was smelly and then they went back to their house.
I am a Year 8 student student at Pt. England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 3 and my teacher is Mrs. Tele'a.
I really like how you included making friends in your story, it was nice thing to read about. Is there any chance that maybe the friendship group helped the person who was being a bully? Because bullies are usually hurting as well and sometimes we all need help. I really like the way you used your adjectives to describe the rusty busty house.
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