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Monday 15 June 2020

Choose it writing/Narrative

Narrative.
Once upon a time there lived a little girl named Layla.
One morning as Layla woke up, she went for a morning
run to have fresh air Layla eyes then got caught in a forest
she had never seen before… Layla then shook her head and
the forest disappeared as she carried on running, the forest then
appeared once again. Layla then ran backwards to hop in the
forest, as she hopped in the forest it was like she was at Disneyland
it had different types of flowers, trees and many more forest things. 


She was amazed by how the forest looked, she had a look around
at the forest she then saw her school friends, she was wondering why
her friends were there as well. Layla ran up to her friends to ask how
they found the forest, her friends then told her the story.

“So we were walking around the block and doing some shopping for
school supplies, we then walked past a forest then it disappeared and
when we walked back it appeared again and it was so confusing. So we
had to walk in it to see what it was like, we had a walk around the
forest, we tried to go out but we couldn't ....”

Layla made a bad mistake walking in the forest, her friends
told her something else her friends said “We found a note card.
It gave us a clue for the other notes to get us out of here, they walked
in every direction to find other clues for the other note cards….

Layla and her friends kept on trying to find a note card to lead
them to the other card, they searched up and down for any other clues,
a few minutes later we found the clue!. We walked straight past it when
we were trying to find it, in the clue it said “Look up and down, make
sure to keep your eyes open for the next clue, I might be in the bush or
in the tree.” 

It ended there and they were confused they looked up
and down in the trees in the bush but there was nothing.
Layla then looked in the garden and she found clue three
inside it said, “Great you found clue three, you need 5
more to get all 8 clues, to search for clue four I am high not
low but high.” It was getting dark and they didn’t
get time to look for clue four so they took a rest next
to the river, the next morning as they woke up they could
hear people walking past the forest without noticing it, they
yelled but no one could hear them or see the forest so they just
carried on with finding four number four.


As they were finding clue four they looked on the trees there was
nothing but then they looked high on the bush and it was there but
the clue was up high that they couldn’t reach it so they tried standing
on each other backs and shoulders but that didn’t work they tried
everything until one of Layla friend found a ladder. So they told
Layla to climb up the ladder because she wasn’t scared of heights
but the others were. So Layla climbed up the ladder and grabbed
the next clue, in the clue it said “You have now found clue five I am
somewhere far from the entrance, you will need 3 more clues to get
the mystery key to get out of the forest. For clue six I am low on the
ground.”

They searched in the same places again just in case there were more clues in the same spot. There weren't any clues so they had to make a decision to go far from the entrance of where they came from, it took them hours to find clue six they found a big mountain and they went up that mountain. They climbed up the mountain, they could see everything, they saw the main entrance, they saw rows of flowers, but they had to do something for them to get out of the forest……


It got dark but they couldn’t find the other clue so they camped on the mountain. They had some food to eat, but Layla wasn’t hungry at all; she was only thirsty for a drink, after that they went to sleep…… Morning came when they woke up, got everything sorted for clue six, Layla walked around the mountain and she found….. Clue six and they walked straight past it when they were walking around the mountain. Layla then shouted “ Guys I found clue six!!!!” Her friends then went running to her, and they were so excited because they wanted to go out of the forest because there was really nothing for them to do.

In the clue it said “ Clue six…. You just have to find clue 7 and clue 8, for clue 7, look even far from the mountain you are on right now, here is one more clue, the note is not white it is red…” 
The clue stopped there. They were tired of walking far and far, but they had no choice so they had to walk to get that second to last clue…

As they were walking to find the other clue Layla was getting distracted from the flowers on the ground and couldn’t help it so she picked out 10 flowers from the garden. Her friends kept on walking without her, so Layla stood up and ran all the way to the other mountain to see if clue 7 was there….. 
She did a few turn around to see if her friends were catching up to her when she was running, as she turned again she saw then running to her so she ran as fast as she could……

She did a few rounds round the mountain to find the clue and she found clue 7 on the floor and clue 8!, Layla was happy that clue 7 and clue 8 was by its side…… Layla opened clue 7 and clue 8 and they had the same words, so Layla looked behind clue 8 on the back to see if there was a different note written and there was…. She read it and it led her to the key to open the back door to get out.

As she opened the door she was happy and her friends were also happy….The End



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